Sunday, December 23, 2007

Dumb Bitch

Dumb Bitch,
What were you thinking,
Nothing,
That is why you are,
a dumb bitch

2 Comments:

Blogger Dr. Pauly said...

Touching and shocking, yet real. Sort of Walt Whitman meets Charles Bukowski, with a tinge of William Blake tossed in there. I can see that you have been heavily influenced by the Confessionalists (the likes of Robert Lowell and Sylvia Plath).

As much as your words are drenched in hatred, there's a glimmer of optimism. You have a gift. You are a true poet.

8:43 PM

 
Blogger Bloody P said...

And this is why Pauly is the best.

8:02 AM

 

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